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Sunday, June 29, 2014

Persuasive Writing: Jess

Keep The Alcohol Ban

Alcohol! Should the Brazilian government let these fans drink alcoholic beverages at The Fifa World Cup? Will it cause trouble or will it be controlled?

Should the Brazilian government let these fans have alcohol? Well if they do it may turn into an unsafe place for children to go and there maybe big fights before games. It could lead to serious injures or even deaths.

The Brazilian government has set this rule for over a decade and why should they withdraw this just because of the Fifa World Cup. The Fifa World Cup is not as powerful as a countries government.

If they take away the ban families won’t be able to go to these games because the intoxicated fans aren’t safe. People will start to take there anger out on innocent people and also innocent players, this is also not safe for other people.

The solution could be that all fans from both sides can wear wristbands and every time they purchase a drink they could get a hole punch, once they reach a certain amount of drinks or they are intoxicated they can get it cut off.

 To conclude I think alcohol should be banned because it is much more safer option and no one will get hurt. Quote- “ you can have fun without alcohol”.

1 comment:

  1. Yes I argee with you Jess t should be banned so it will keep everybody safe
    From Harrison (Jess' Brother)

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