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Showing posts with label Explanation Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Explanation Writing. Show all posts

Sunday, April 6, 2014

Explanation Writing: Abolition of Slavery by Ella K


Abolition Of Slavery

In the 1780’s slavery was thought of cheap, normal, employment.

The pro-slavery lobby tried to get rid of Africans by saying that they had no native society, lived like savages, were grateful for the chance to escape Africa, enjoyed the crossing & benefited from a good life on the plantations.

In 1791, thousands of pamphlets were printed which encouraged humans to boycott  sugar produced by slaves. Estimates suggest some 300,000 people abandoned sugar, with sales dropping by a third to a half. Some stores advertised products which had been made by ‘freeman’ & sales of sugar from India, where slavery was not used, increased tenfold over two years.

Thomas Clarkson documented the brutal treatment of the slave ships’ crews by demonstrating that, on average 20% of each crew died from disease or ill treatment before the ship returned. This proved that the trade was horrid for sailors as well as Africans.

This long-term impact of the campaign was highly remarkable, because it thoroughly established anti-slavery sentiment in the national consciousness therefore slavery was finally abolished in 1838!

Abolishing slavery was a long & meaningful process & slavery in Africa is not missed.

By Ella K

Abolition of Slavery: Jess W


Abolition of Slavery

Abolition movement was carried out by people with the goal of ending all slavery. This movement believed strongly that slavery was deeply wrong.

In 1787 the society for the Abolition of the slave trade was founded in Britain. And was lead by founding members William Wilberforce and Thomas Clarkson.


Slavery was officially abolished in most of the British Empire on 1 August 1833 however abolitionists would continue campaigning against the international trade of slaves after this date.


The act bans the employment of children under the age of nine and limits the workday for children between the ages of 13 and 18 to 12 hours. The laws provides inspection of working conditions.


Unfortunately all these years on there is still modern day slavery in our world today.

By Jessica W   

Tuesday, March 11, 2014

Air Jaws: Explanation Writing

Last week the children in Room 13 learnt about why the sharks in the waters around False Bay breach the water. The children were amazed at how fast the sharks could strike the seal and the height the shark could breach. Here are a few examples of the children's writing.